Him: Go and get me a beer, love.
Her: Are your legs painted on? Why can’t you get it yourself?
Him: I thought you wanted me to tell you what to do.
Her: I do.
Him: So, get me a beer.
Her: [she sighs] That’s not exactly what I had in mind.
Him: What did you have in mind.
Her: Well, you might be more dominant with me.
Him: Yeah, so asking you to get me a beer isn’t considered being dominant then?
Her: No!
Him: What about making you take out the trash?
Her: No!
Him: Washing my car?
Her: No!
Him: Mowing the lawns?
Her: No!
Him: You’re not giving me a lot to work with here babe.
Her: [she gives him 'the look'] I was thinking more in a…you know…sexual way.
Him: [he thinks] How about…undo your blouse and show me your breasts.
Her: Yes, that sort of thing.
Him: So, do it.
Her: [she unbuttons her blouse and shows him her breasts, then covers them again] There!
Him: Very nice, but I didn’t tell you to cover them. Take off the blouse and bra and give them to me.
Her: [she removes the blouse and bra and hands them to him] Happy?
Him: Very. Now take off your skirt and panties and give them to me too.
Her: [she hesitates a moment then removes her skirt and panties and hands them to him as well] This is not as easy as I thought.
Him: It’s easy from where I sit. Speaking of which, come and sit on my lap.
Her: [she goes and sits on his knee] That okay?
Him: Mmhmm. Actually no, how about you lie over my lap instead.
Her: [she moves to lie over his lap] Better?
Him: Oh yeah. [he rubs his hand over her bottom and in between her legs] This will work just fine.
Her: Ooh, I didn’t expect you to…
Him: [he smacks his palm down on her bottom] Didn’t expect what? [he begins spanking her bottom vigorously]
Her: You to do that…oh…ow…ah…ow…that hurts.
Him: [he stops smacking her] It’s supposed to isn’t it? Besides I want to do this, so I will. [begins spanking her vigorously again]
Her: Ohhhh…[a sob escapes her lips]
Him: Tell me how it feels.
Her: It hurts, a lot, but it is nice too.
Him: [starts spanking harder] How about now? Still nice?
Her: Oooh, that really hurts. Oh, honey, you might have to stop.
Him: Not just yet, I’m not done. [he spanks harder still but this time slowly and rubbing his hand between her legs in between each spank] You are enjoying this, you’re quite wet down here.
Her: It hurts though.
Him: Ahh, yeah, I got something that hurts too. How about you swing around and get more comfortable.
Her: [she unzips his pants and soon sinks down on his erection, panting] Oh, honey, I don’t remember being this aroused before.
Him: You’re so damn wet baby, don’t think I’m going to be able to last long though.
Her: I don’t mind, I’m coming now. [she throws her head back and grips his shoulders]
Him: Me too. [he holds her to him, gripping her waist]
[They both shudder and cry out.]
Her: That was amazing.
Him: Yes, it was, maybe this dominating thing is worth a go.
Her: So far so good. [she smiles]
Him: [he smiles] Will you get me a beer now.
Her:[she gives him 'the look' again] You’re pushing your luck.
Him: [laughing] Thought I’d give it another try.
Dear Mina
Great story – your best yet
Lovely way of spending a Sunday afternoon.
Now, may I go and fetch you a beer
LOL
Darren
Yes that is a great way to spend an afternoon. Just wondering, did she ever get him that beer?
Hugs,
PK
Mina, loved it, I always thought that, “The Look”, was the exclusive property of the dominant.
As others have said, there are fact few better ways to spend any free time together.
Certainly one of the best little stories I’ve read up to now.
Warm hugs,
Paul.
As Paris Hilton would say..That’s Hot!
Dear Wilhelmina, I think this story was great. I have to say, I didn’t fancy the hot part as much as the dialogue before that. I think it was brilliant, that sense of everydayness and that urge to do something special and the banter and discussion. There was something about the contrast between their views and what they wanted that really captured my imagination.
Hugs
Janice
Darren, glad you enjoyed it, it would be the perfect Sunday. No thanks on the beer it is 8am, but the offer was nice.
PK, he never expected her to but wanted to see the reaction. Yes, lazy Sundays.
Paul, I think ‘the look’ is supposed to be the exclusive property of the dominant but these two have a lot to work out first. Happy you enjoyed the story.
Mthc, thanks, happy to warm you up since I know it is winter there.
Janice, I too love dialogue and what it can tell us about the characters, their view of the world and their behaviour.
It was one of those stories that started in one place and ended elsewhere. Originally she tells him she wants to be his slave but when he treats her like one (or what he thinks one should be treated like) she doesn’t like it. The ending was to be her getting him his beer and then sitting naked at his feet. The characters decided they wanted this instead, you know how that can be.
Hugs everyone
Mina
HI. Boss lady just called and she is coming home. Better be quick then. Better open some beer.
Happy saturday, I wish I was where KE says you are. Is it secrret where you live? It is 8am where you live and 9pm where I live so that gives it away. But where do I live. Thankyou mina I liked this one better, how cozy it seems.
You are all wrong “the look’ is not dominance property its womans’ property.
Kilty.xx
Kilty, she told me she is on her way, both of you go back and read my last two comments on The New Partner, Part 3.
It is a bit of a secret, I suppose, where I am as I don’t intend on writing about me, nothing of interest lies therein. But it is 8:30am, for the record.
Happy Friday night.
Hugs
Mina
What a fun story. Great work!!
Hi Remsoh and welcome. Glad you enjoyed reading it.
Hugs
Mina
Mina,
I loved that exchange! Thanks for sharing that great dialog.
You’re definitely on a roll now.
Hugs,
Bonnie
Hi Bonnie and welcome. I am pleased you liked it as I know how well you write yourself.
And thank you for the link as well.
Hugs
Mina
Dear Madam Mina
Nothing of interest lies therein? Do not offer false modesty please
Why I oughta
Hmmm – wedgie negates the need to be naked…more skin visible
You are a top chick – shine that light
Darren
Darren, trust me I am as dull as dishwater. As to ‘top chick’, I’ll take that compliment; spoken like a true Aussie bloke.
Hugs
Mina
Dear Mina
Top chick is also a pommie derivative – see top bird – and I’m not an Aussie bloke, not that there is anything wrong with that – Midlander meself.
I must find dishwater fascinating on the basis that I keep returning to your interesting blog, so I doubt you are dull.
LOL
Darren
*laughs* Thanks Darren.
I though Mina was kiwi? Doesn’t that make her a “chuck”?
Yep I’m that too. *smiles*
Mina — Dahling — Great fun — realistic, and we knew somehow this would not end in the expected way.
There was a song stateside — yars ago — our band did it when the crowd was good and drunk…
PUT ANOTHER LOG ON THE FIRE
Put another log on the fire
Cook me up some bacon and some beans,
Go out to the car and fix the tire
Fetch my pie and mend my old blue jeans…
…. (much forgotten)…
Aren’t I always nice to your kid sister
Dont I take her driving every night,
So lay down at my feet,
Cause I like you when you’re sweet and you know that it ain’t Feminine to fight..
…
So fill my pipe and then go fetch my slippers,
Brewme up another pot of tea,
And put another log on the fire
Then tell me why you’re leaving me…
Wystan, it was fun and I do like the ‘ordinary’ settings . Ordinary kinky people. *smiles* Good Lord, I know this song, we used to sing it at school. That one and a load of John Denver. Thanks.
Hugs
Mina
I think its unanimous. Great story Mina. *smiles*
Hello Greenwoman and welcome, glad you enjoyed it.
Hugs
Mina
[...] Have you been to Wilhelmina Dreams blog yet? If not, you are missing out on quite a variety of spanking stories. She has F/m and M/F spanking stories, switch spanking stories, erotic spanking stories and some romantic spanking stories. I spent some time there tonight reading and browsing, and I found this fun story called, Sunday Afternoon. [...]
Thanks to the Spanking Storybook for reviewing this story and thanks for the plug. Appreciated.
Mina
Well. That just goes to show you,
a story can be written with dialogue
as a central motif.
You’ve captured each moment “visually,” with just the dialogue of the characters; definitely “arousing,” from this reader’s standpoint (pun intended~~lol!)..Excellent story..
..I could see her predicament, and where it was leading. The “erotic” nature of the spanking was a good turn (OTK, yay!)…
Cheers.
~x~SinfullyAnon.
Thank you SinfullyAnon and welcome to my place. I do enjoy dialogue very much.
Hugs
Mina
Just you go and get that beer!
Darren
*Mina gets beer for Darren and then ‘accidentally’ spills it over him*
Oops, didn’t mean to…
Accidentally?
*Scratches side of head*
Me thinks this was no accident.
“Fetch me clean trousers young lady”
“And clean up this small mess.”
*grabs ear as she returns and bends her beckoningly into position*
She resists only slightly and grins, as she leans forward and his right leg snakes around her two legs. It is about this point that she spots the danger to her derriere, ….
LOL
Love your work, Dovely,
D